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    Grim

    good story but sadly many many typo, words missing, grammatical error ...making the reading not enjoyable what about the editing work? it was my 1st try at this autor....not encouraging to buy more... sad because the story was good
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    Good plot, bad execution.

    First, let me say that I enjoyed the plot line in this book. That being said, there were a lot of problems. There seems to be little to no work put into editing because there are a ton of grammatical errors. Added to that, the characters go back and forth from being well developed and intricate to either falling in love in a matter of days or becoming a raging barbarian for no apparent reason. So while I enjoyed the plot line, it could have used some serious editing and revision to make this story something much better than it was.
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    Great story..needs an editor

    The story line is a good read and the characters are great. I really enjoyed this book and hope the there is another to continue the story, how ever it does need a grammer and spell check. If you can look past the errors, it is a great read
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    Grim

    I enjoyed the book but there were a lot of editing and grammar errors that I found distracting. The story was quite well done and the conversations were natural. If this story was cleaned up a little, it could be quite epic.
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    Awesome!

    A really good book but the editing is painful at times. It kept pulling me out of the story. Dispite that, it's totally worth reading! You will love the characters and root for the good guys all the while cursing the bad guys.
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