More titles to consider

Shopping Cart

You're getting the VIP treatment!

Item(s) unavailable for purchase
Please review your cart. You can remove the unavailable item(s) now or we'll automatically remove it at Checkout.
itemsitem
itemsitem
Ratings and Book Reviews (23 152 star ratings
23 reviews
)

Overall rating

3.5 out of 5
152
5 Stars 4 Stars 3 Stars 2 Stars 1 Star
35 42 48 15 12

Share your thoughts

You've already shared your review for this item. Thanks!

We are currently reviewing your submission. Thanks!

Complete your review

All Book Reviews

  • 11 person found this review helpful

    11 people found this review helpful

    11 of 12 people found this review helpful

    Thanks for your feedback!

    Inexperienced Mage

    Under no circumstances should you start reading this saga (at least not if you have any respect for the written language!) The basic premise is good and the story and characters are actually very engaging. The problem lies in the actual text - I have never, in over forty years of avid reading, come across something so amateurish. It's like the book was dictated using some very poor voice recognition software married to an auto-correct program with a virus! One typo per page of text I would consider poor for a published work that you have paid for. One per paragraph is totally unacceptable. When you find yourself counting the mistakes per sentence you know it's time to give up! Just two examples should illustrate my point: "no wear" - when it should have been 'nowhere' "It donned on him" - when it should have 'dawned' on him instead. If someone claims to have edited or proof-read this work then they should be fired immediately - I can't say any more.
  • 3 person found this review helpful

    3 people found this review helpful

    3 of 5 people found this review helpful

    Thanks for your feedback!

    Inexperienced Author

    Some good ideas. But very poorly written. For example : Mark fell into an old basement ,found a book and suddenly he's a mage . It's as if the author made everything too easy.
  • 1 person found this review helpful

    1 people found this review helpful

    1 of 1 people found this review helpful

    Thanks for your feedback!

    Great story

    I thoroughly enjoyed the story however there were so many spelling and grammar mistakes it got very annoying try to decipher what was actually intended. This author needs to find a new editor.
  • 0 person found this review helpful

    0 people found this review helpful

    0 of 0 people found this review helpful

    Thanks for your feedback!

    Mr

    Not bad gets better.
  • 0 person found this review helpful

    0 people found this review helpful

    0 of 0 people found this review helpful

    Thanks for your feedback!

    Enjoyable - but needs a spellchecker

    Enjoyable short novel, however spelling and grammar really needs some work.
152

You can read this item using any of the following Kobo apps and devices:

  • DESKTOP
  • eREADERS
  • TABLETS
  • IOS
  • ANDROID
  • WINDOWS