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    interesting idea, but...

    I liked the idea of the story and some of the characters, but the book was riddled with typos, auto-spellcheck errors, and worst of all, fact inconsistencies. As an example, early in the book the planet in question was said to have gravity of 1.1 earth normal, later in the book it was .95. All of these things could have been avoided with good proof readers/editors. More important than these proofing issues is that the writing style was quite amateurish. There were several times that i just wanted to stop reading it an move on to another book. I persevered and was rewarded with a simplistic 'star trek ending', where everything was assumed to have turned out just fine. but in reality there was no conclusion given to the overall conflict of the book.
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    The Lonely Sun

    Really good story. Appalling number of typos - very disappointing. This is probably the first in a series and I would be interested to read them. Recommended
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    Worth a read for sure.

    Interesting story. Nicely developed. At time I read it, there were many typos throughout which could easily be fixed.
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    The lonely sun

    The story has a brilliant plot but it becomes apparent very quickly that there had been no attempt at editing. Spelling, grammar and confusing dialogue ruined it for me. I would encourage the author to rework this with the help of an editor. The result would be worth the money I lost on this edition.
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