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Ratings and Reviews (9 36 star ratings
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    Great story, too many errors. Fire proof-reader.

    Story moved well and kept me enthralled with the storyline. I had a great deal of disappointment as I waded through the many typo's, grammatical errors and transposed words. It is obvious that no one edited this book. I volunteer to proof the next book as I was aggravated with all the errors in this one.
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    Proof reading before publishing

    Though I Enjoy the series, the torrential bad engish and spelling errors show a unfinished product. It is at times as if a program translated from another language with no human attention to form. Having a single person with a passing familiarity with the english language proof read prior to publishing would have been acceptable.
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    Disappointed

    Started off pretty good but slowly fizzled out. Needs a bit more work.
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    A very good story

    As stated above, this was a very good story, although the editing was very rough. There are a lot of misspelled word, which makes is anoying more than anything else. I hope someone is anle to correct all the errors.
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    Another epic chapter

    Great as always. Exiting fast paced action combined with deep characters makes for a wonderfull read.
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